T2+Rimu+Novel

__Tuesday 5th July 2011__

Today I wrote in Chapter three

__Tuesday 28 June 2011__

Today I read through the whole second chapter and then edited some of it to make sense and so it wouldn't say I at the start of lot's of sentences

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__Thursday 23 June 2011__

Today I edited someones writing to help the second chapter make more sense

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__Friday 17 June__

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__Thursday 16 June__

Today I edited some paragraphs so they made sense