T1+Persuade

L.I. We are learning make content relevant and add weight to argument by having an effective position statement, main points, evidence and restatement. Contain elaboration of main points.E ffective position statement:S.C. we can
 * make our position and purpose clear
 * use a rhetorical question
 * include a list of fact/evidence that will be discussed in writing

Restatement, elaboration of main points: S.C. We Can
 * restate my position throughout my writing
 * make a main point and back it up with evidence or statistics

__Monday 14 March__

Tauranga Intermediate 30 18th Ave  Tauranga  Dear Mr Diver, Thank you very much for giving us an extended Morning Tea last week. I think that everyone in the school, students and teachers, would of appreciated it very much. I think that we should keep being rewarded for good behaviour. Wouldn’t you like to be rewarded? There are three reasons why we should be given an extended Morning Tea. One the students will behave better, two teachers will have more time to finish marking and getting ready for the next rotation and three students will improve in their Physical education. I believe that students will get back to class quicker and behave better if we are rewarded at the end of the week for it. People in the community would also notice the behaviour level and think that the school was very good and tell other people. Giving everyone a longer break would also give the teachers more time to do work. They would be up to date with all their work and have more time to help us students with our literacy and maths. It would also give teachers time to get ready to do the next activity. There would also be improvement in the students fitness levels because if the Morning Tea is extended the students will have more time to play sport. If that happens they will be tired and quiet when they get back to class and work better. Also they will be tired in assembly and will be quiet and won’t talk. This is why we must be given a longer Morning Tea. Yours Sincerely,  Maddie Watson



__Monday 4 April__